Rikanaksu Hollows

Name: Rikanaksu

Gender: male

Age: 14

Height: Taller than any human

Race: Hollows

Rank: Adjuchas

Looks: like a twisted demon with claws and fangs
Mask looks like head shape, has eyes that look like actual eye sockets just empty and black, has demon like horns coming out of it, is a shade of grey, has red slash looking marks on it, teeth look like fangs filed to points, has sices from previous battles

Personality: strategist, destroyer, smart

Likes: food, a good battle, killing

Dislikes: all living things

Crushes: He once liked a girl named Kiranas.

History: Lived in his village his entire life. His mother is worried about father at war. He has trained himself in combat. He has worked and worked. His work has sculpted his life and his muscles.He was slashed half to death one day by his mother who was in a drunken fit . By the time she realised what had happened she had crippled herself in pain.He decided that he didnt want to be normal and just die he came back. He hides in the dark corners and shadowed alleyways ready to strike. He dreads the day that somone tells him that his father is dead. He wants to live every day to the fullest. He wants to show how powerful he can be. He will defeat anything in his path. He plans to gain rank as fast as possible and outskill anyone. He will strategise his wayto the top of the Hollow ranks. He will prove to his mother that he can live up to his fathers example. He hopes that one day he will see his father. he will not notice how ugly he may look. He desires to impress everyone he can.

Need to work more on History, write that you're a Hollow, not an Arrancar, and keep in mind the fact that Hollows are monsters...and that, even as an Adjuchas, you're only Humanoid in appearance, and are larger then even tall Humans.

srry im new to this

Thats fine.

Need a better description. If you don't know what a Hollow looks like, then go find out. Obivously, need longer history. Also, a description of your mask's shape would be suggested.

i changed mi race and where should i put the shape of mi mask

A. Its Spelled ARRANCAR!

B. I thought I said no more Arrancar...

C. Theres no such thing as an Arrancar Village. An Arrancar is a Hollow become Human by taking off it's mask and gaining Shinigami Powers.

Alright, APPROVED!