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Kokoro Ichimaru
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PostSubject: Kokoro's Zanpakuto   1/21/2008, 09:24

Name of zanpakuto: Beleren

Length: 65 cm

Hilt: The hilt is a basic handle and gaurd. The handle is blue and black, and the gaurd is black.

Sheath: The sheath for Beleren is a simple Dark blue one with the japanese kaji for 3.

Appearance: The sealed form of Beleren is just a simple katana with a curve at the top.
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Shikai: When Beleren is released, the end of his handle goes into a 45 degree angle, and his blade gets little oval shaped holes on it, increasing its speed.

History: Kokoro released his shikai in a battle when he was 5th seat of the 3rd squad. He had entered the battle to defend his name, because evereybody disrespected him because he was related to the trator, Ichimaru Gin. Halfway through the battle, when winning seemed bleak a voice started to talk to him. He found out his Zanpaukto's name was Beleren, and that his release command was "Erase!". His opponent charged at him and Kokoro released Beleren, giving him 3x the strength he originally had, and easily beating his opponent.

Spirit Energy Cost: Shou Kokoro (Destroy Mind) - 7 SPC-Shou Kokoro enables Subeta and Toku, and those techniques cannot be used without activating this first.

- Subeta -5 SPC- Subeta makes the target think there is a blade attacking him, but there is not, the blade will not do any damage, but will occupy the opponent with something to dodge.
- Toku -5 SPC- Toku makes a sheild appear in front of Kokoro. Unlike Subeta, the sheild is able to block some weak Hollow attacks, such as Cero. This technique is useless against Shinigami.
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Bankai: Konton Beleren- Beleren dissapears and Kokoro has the ability to make his Shikai attacks increase 10x. Subeta is increased to actually damage the target. Toku can block weak Shinigami Kido, and mid-level Hollow attacks. Kokoro is also able to multiply himself to 1000 hims. This technique makes the enemy think that there are 1000 Kokoro's, but in reality there is only one. These clones can use techniques from Beleren's Shikai. Kokoro's clothes change to full white, and look very similiar to Ichigo's Bankai form, exept in whit and black.

History: Kokoro released his bankai while defending the Seiretei in an all-out battle. Once again he was pushed to his limit, and winning was totally out of the question when he wanted to live. He started to communicate with Beleren and felt a surge of power go through his body. Beleren told him he could now unleash his Bankai. Kokoro unleashed it, and he won that very battle.

Spirit Energy Cost: Bankai- Konton Beleren - 15 SPC- This technique activates Belerens Bankai, and makes him dissapear completly, increasing his attacks 10 fold.
- Sen Subeta- 10 SPC- The evolved form of Subeta. This increases the amount of blades to 10. These blades have the ability to actually damage the target.
- Sen Toku- 10 SPC- This technique increases the effectiveness of Toku. The sheild increases to 10 feet high, and can block mid-level Hollow attacks, and low-level Kido.
- Sen Shizoku- 35 SPC- This technique makes the opponent think there are 1000 Kokoro's, but in reality there is only one. The clones can use mid level Kido, and Belerens Shikai.


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PostSubject: Re: Kokoro's Zanpakuto   1/21/2008, 10:56

Shou Kokoro (Destroy Mind) - 7 SPC
- Subeta -5 SPC
- Toku -5 SPC

You need to EXPLAIN these powers in your Shikai. Same thing with Bankai.

Mind Control isn't what I'd consider a Bankai...Rather, its more of an Advance Keido if anything. No, your Bankai can't just be "You control their mind." Its just not Bankai then. Plus, mind control would pretty much be instant kill, and thus, god mod.
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PostSubject: Re: Kokoro's Zanpakuto   1/21/2008, 19:48

OK edited, is that better?
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PostSubject: Re: Kokoro's Zanpakuto   1/21/2008, 20:06

Well its...interesting. Definitly getting a creapy Aisen feeling...

At times like this you wish you had a Genjutsu Kai. fear

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