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PostSubject: Yorokobi's Zanpakuto   1/20/2008, 15:58

Name of zanpakuto: Sumiyaka

Length: 72 cm

Hilt: The hilt looks like this


Sheath: Its a black sheath that is caried at Yorokobis side . The sheath is made of snake skin. The sheath also has a white dragon on it acept it has it on the sides of the sheath instead of circling

Appearance: Sumiyaka is a black sword that looks like ichigos when he goes into bankai form it is as hard as diamond. Also there is a white dragon like design that circles the blade.
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Shikai: The blade it self does not change much the blade becomes as thin as a razor making it very sharp yet it still remains just as hard as diamond. This makes the blade able to move very swiftly and can almost make it appear invisble at times. The ability is when the user swings his blade it creates a very sharp gust of wind that can cut through stone. Also when activating his Shikai he gains the power to be Faster than shunpo by 2 times.

History: Yorokobi released his Shikai when he was out killing hallows. He came a cross a hallow of likes hed never had seen before. It was a Menos Gillian he fought the best he could unfourtunately with no shikiai he knew he would die no matter how strong and fast he was. Then when he was had been thrusted 10 feet away and was strating to die. Yorokobi then entered a world he had never seen before thats were he laid eyes on the Zanpakuto's true form. The Zanpaktou looked like a cheetah with a hawks head and hawk wings. After seeing it he knew the what the name was it was Sumiyaka. Yorokobi called out "Rise Sumiyaka," it released his Shikai Sumiyaka became really light he noticed that the blade was so thin he could bearly see it. Yorokobi slashed the blade in the direction of hallow to get the feel for this new lighter sword he noticed that right after he swung the blade the Menos cried out in pain and a cut formed on its side. This was Sumiyaka's ability he knew it Yorokobi didn't know how he knew he just did. He became so fast that when his fellow Shinigami used Shunpo to get behind the menos and it didn't work but when Yorokobi just normally ran with Shikai on he was so fast that the menos couldn't even see him. After releasing Shikai it was easy for Yorokobi to take down the Menos.

Spirit Energy Cost: 8 for Hyoujin(the wind slash attack)
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Bankai: The Zanpakuto is still as thin as a razor blade but now there are small sharp spikes that shout out of everey direction of Sumiyaka. But when in Bankai Yorokobi sprouts wings like a hawk allowing for flight the wings rip up the shirt Yorokobi wears showing his whole torso has been changed to look like a hawk, Speed is increased to faster than a speeding bullet litteraly Yorokobi is moving so fast he dissapears to any one who can't move on the same level of speed he is at, and an upgrade from his Hyoujin now when he slashes his blade 8 or more wind slashes are shot at the enemy.

History: After getting shikai Yorokobi knew the only thing holdding him back from being a captain was a bankai. So Yorokobi devoted the rest of his time to working on mastering and getting a bankai. Yorokobi knew that he would have to beat Sumiyaka some how to gain the bankai this took years for most to master he thought to himself. Then later that night Sumiyaka's true form came to him in a dream. The Hawk/Cheetah spirit told him that if Yorokobi could beat it in a race then he would be able to master the bankai. Dang I'm fast but even im know match for a Hawk/Cheetah those were the fastest animals of flight and land Yorokobi thought.

So Yorokobi spent most of his days running arround to build up strong leg mucles to race Sumiyaka. After about 10 years of training Yorokobi could out run any of the other Shinigami's and could keep up with flash steps. He was ready to take on Sumiyaka. Later that day when everyone was a sleep Sumiyaka appeared in Yorokobi's room. Which was suprisingly loud it woke Yorokobi up which was a very unusual thing sense Yorokobi could sleep through anything.

"Geze what the heck just happended" asked Yorokobi to himself. "Hurry up if you wish to race me then you must be very focussed." Said Sumiyaka. The race was from Yorokobis room to the other side of seretai. "Ready set go" Sumiyaka yelled. Yorokobi propelled himself out his window at the same time Sumiyaka did. The race was neck and neck for the most part as they were nearing the wall Yorokobi pulled ahead of Sumiyaka. He had won in a sigh of releif Yorokobi fell down in a slump all those years of training had paid off he could now become a captain.

Spirit Energy Cost: 15 SE for Sugoichisoku(The speed one) 10 SE for Tsubasa(hawk wings) 13 SE Upgraded form of Hyoujin


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PostSubject: Re: Yorokobi's Zanpakuto   1/20/2008, 16:00

What do you spend the SE on? Activating a Shikai doesn't take SE, only the Special Attacks do.
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PostSubject: Re: Yorokobi's Zanpakuto   1/20/2008, 16:04

Does the ability cost Se because thats for ability and I wasnt sure what cost should be so I put it asa 8 cause I think that sounds good
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PostSubject: Re: Yorokobi's Zanpakuto   1/20/2008, 16:13

Yes, its just for abilities. But I don't know which ability it does. Thus, you can't just write 8 SE. You need to write, say,

8 SE to use Wind attack...

Though it would be better with an actual name.
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PostSubject: Re: Yorokobi's Zanpakuto   1/20/2008, 17:26

APPROVED!
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PostSubject: Re: Yorokobi's Zanpakuto   1/20/2008, 23:23

Added bankai ^_^

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PostSubject: Re: Yorokobi's Zanpakuto   1/21/2008, 00:01

Could you be a little...different? Cus the wings are kinda..old.

Also, if you do keep the wings despite my claims on your lack of Originality(Razz), does this transformation change your clothes in anyway?(If want an example, Ichigo.)

Also, I'm afraid the blade HAS to change somewhat, else it isn't Bankai.
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PostSubject: Re: Yorokobi's Zanpakuto   1/21/2008, 00:12

Ok edited it I choose to be un orginal Rolling Eyes

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PostSubject: Re: Yorokobi's Zanpakuto   1/21/2008, 00:13

Eh, Approved.
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PostSubject: Re: Yorokobi's Zanpakuto   2/2/2008, 13:43

Added one more Shikai ability

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PostSubject: Re: Yorokobi's Zanpakuto   2/2/2008, 18:52

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